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Poslannik is the russia’s first clinic where techniques of anti-age medicine all most effective today are collected. Our innovative techniques plus the hi-tech equipment allow to tell with confidence: “We will solve your problem, whatever diffcult it was!”. We offer wide range of versatile diagnostics and treatment and prophylactic procedures. Among them are: development of the comprehensive program on decrease in biological age, full genetic research with recommendations of experts, development of the comprehensive program on weight reduction and appetite control, etc.
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Poslannik is the first clinic in Russia to incorporate state-of-the-art anti-aging medical techniques. Its innovative treatments and hi-tech equipment allow the clinic’s staff to predict confidently: “We will solve your problem, however difficult!” Poslannik provides a wide range of versatile diagnostics, treatments and prophylactic procedures, including the development of comprehensive programs to help counteract the effects of your biological age, work on weight reduction and appetite control, full genetic research with expert recommendations, etc.
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